My mom was always doing something, whether it was school, drama, sports or work she was never bored. When she was in Jr. High, in church, she was doing skits and school and sports, but she still kept up with the same social status. She was well liked and all the people on her skit team wanted to be her friend. She would practice a weekly skit throughout the the school week and then on sunday she would preform it before the elementary kids. She was well liked among the elementary kids too. many people talked about how great she was and how well she adapts for moving so much. My mom was known throughout my church because of who she was and what she did.
California Dreamin'
14 years ago
hey Darian!(:
ReplyDeletethe story about your mom was great what i got from i is that she hard-working,adaptable,likable and very approachable. now the first two blogs i didnt really find anything to change but the last blog(Anecdote#3) did really make total scence to me maybe re-word it? but otherwise good job!
Nice, sounds like your mom is very outgoing and helpful. I think you can combine some sentences and it would make you story flow better. Over all, it's good.
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